Fighting HIV and AIDS

A coalition of major companies including, Facebook, Nokia, Pfizer, Nike, and The National Basketball Association will work in 3 cities to help stop the spread of HIV. These three cities include the District, New York and Oakland, California. This coalition will be able to help spread awarness better than the city administration because it can reach further into the communtiy. These three cities were chosen because they are amoung the top 20 cities affected by AIDS/HIV in America.

This article had an interesting lead. I would have done something completely differently if I were writing this story. It was not very interesting and I found the article to be more interesting than the lead made it out to be. It did not make me want to keep reading. However, the writer did use a quote in the third paragraph, and I feel that it was a very good use of the quote. It summed up what was going on and gave a sort of preview to what was coming later in the article.