CNN reports police were able to find a missing Ohio girl along with her mom and a sex offender after a tip from the farm they were staying at. The girl, Haylee, had been missing for almost a month. The ranch, in San Diego County, California, was raided Tuesday and both adults were apprehended without incident. Ranch members said the girl didn't raise any suspicions for a couple weeks, and it wasn't until a former guest saw a billboard asking for help to find Haylee, her mom, and the man that the ranch investigated.
I like the lead in this story. The words used are very descriptive and help to paint the picture of how the story will proceed. The lead is under 30 words, making it precise and easy for the reader to understand.
The rest of the story flows well, and brings in a personal touch when talking to a member at the ranch. Due to the laid back nature of the ranch, it shows how these three were able to hide without being detected.
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