A Congressional commission is trying to come up with ways to reduce rape in prisons. Today, the commission will offer recommendations such as improving training for prison and jail employees, classifying vulnerable inmates, and improving medical services. The commission said The Bureau of Justice Statistics estimates 60,500 prisoners were sexually assaulted in 2007.
I thought this story was very precise and to the point. The lead gave enough information to describe the story without being too short. The information is laid out in a manner that's easy to read.
One small detail was confusing, at least for me. A study is mentioned near the beginning of the story, but I can't tell if the study is in reference to the commission's recommendations or the statistic of prisoners sexually assaulted.
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